Friday, August 20, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday

(Photo/artwork provided by Charles; artist and source unknown)


Their eyes were somehow accusing. They obviously seemed to think that I mistakenly walked through a wrong door. That I didn't belong there. In their preoccupation with undressing each other they didn't even consider that I had walked through the door quite deliberately. They had no idea of the pleasures that this stranger in their doorway was going to show them. I was hired to end their bratty ways. Their fathers had no idea what their daughters were going to be doing instead. I stood there for a moment and drank in the sight of their bare breasts and long legs. All three of them jumped when I smacked the riding crop against my boot. It was not the last time the twitch of my hand would have that effect on them.



Flash Fiction Friday!

7 comments:

  1. Oh ho! So it WASN'T a mistake. Intriguing approach! I'm happy you joined in this week; hopefully we'll see more from you in future.

    Welcome to FFF!

    -- PB

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  2. Nice post, MB. You would certainly have your hands full with those three. Welcome to FFF!

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  3. Riding crop, boots, pleasures...
    Very, very nice!

    Welcome to FFF!

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  4. As M. Night Shyamalan would say, "What a twist!" I'm only sorry that considerations of length mean we don't get to hear about all the sexy lessons.

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  5. A man who know how to take charge. Love it!

    ~CP ;-)

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  6. Such naughty little things. The mix of daddy hiring you is nice.

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  7. My first week at FFF too. Reading your story I wondered how much they might teach you. Three to one after all.

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